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MADsushi's application

Post by MADsushio on Sun Jun 09, 2013 7:20 pm

Out Of Character Information

Steam Name: MADsushi
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:34720339
Steam URL: steamcommunity.com/id/mad_sushi
HL2RP Server Playtime: In the server: About 2 hours.
I agree not to ask admins to check my application.
Do you have any experience role-playing as an "Civil Protection Officer"?: Yes, as a 05 and a 04 Helix.


Regarding Your Character And The MPF:

Give an example between your loyalist and an MPF Unit:
MPF: /me walks into the block. Goes upstairs.
Loyalist: /me looks at the man. Fastly approaches the MPF unit in a respectful way.
Loyalist says "Do you need something officer?"
MPF says "Have you seen any unusual behaviour?"
Loyalist says "Nothing sir, thanks to your help, the block have been able to keep itself clean from any unusual behaviour".
MPF: /me stares to the man for a couple of seconds, then laughs.
Loyalist says "It's something wrong officer?"
Loyalist /me has a fearful look.
MPF says "Keep up the good work citizen"
MPF says "Now move"
MPF: /me gets back himself to a serious attitude.
Loyalist: /me tries to stop trembling.
Loyalist says "Thank you officer"
Loyalist: /me walks off

Give an example between your MPF, and a group of heavily armed rebels:
MPF /me is patrolling around the plaza.
it can he heard steps on a iron surface from above.
MPF /me looks up being able to see a rebel crawling on the catwalks.
MPF: /me pulls off his pistol from his holster with his right hand, aiming at the rebel on the catwalks and trying to shoot it two time.
Rebel: /me Reach an non-visible place for the unit.
MPF: /me starts radioing the situation.
it starts to appear a heavily armed group of rebels from one in the ends of the catwalks.
Rebel 2: /me shoots to the unit.
MPF: /me runs to a corner too being shot by one of the rebels
/me tries to a
MPF: /radio There is an armed group of rebels on the catwalks, need assistance.
Rebels stop shooting.
When other units arrives theres none in the plaza but the injuried unit bleeding.


Give an example between an MPF unit and a free vortigaunt:
/it There is a group of heavily armed Combine inspecting one of the blocks. They are in the lobby.
MPF DvL: “04! Go check the second floor.”
MPF unit says “Copy.”
MPF /me goes upstairs. And when he gets to the second floor he spot a green light coming out from behind of one of the doors of the appartments.
/me approaches the door. And shoot the lock, getting inside and spotting a free vortigaunt and a injuried citizen with him.
MPF /me seems confused since its he doesn’t know how was possible a vortigaunt getting into the apartments.
MPF yells “To the wall!”
Vortigaunt: “The officer has no need to use the force”
MPF yells “To the wall! Now!”
Vortigaunt /me moves to the wall, facing it.
MPF /radio I have a vrotigaunt and a injuried citizen at the 2-A .
It can be heard unrecognizable words from the unit’s radio.


Give an example between your MPF and a higher ranked unit:
Me: /me is guarding the one of the hard points of the city.
MPF DvL: /me approaches the unit, making a gest in order to catch his attention.
MPF DvL: Leave this point, I’ll stay here. The CmD need you at the Nexus.
Me: Ok Sir!
Me: /me starts walking off.
MPF DvL: Hurry up unit!
Me: /me starts running.

Your character's backstory:
Sergio Chang, born in 1979. Punta Arenas, Chile South America. Coming from a middle-low class family, he was part of his own country's Investigation Police Deparment. He finally achieves success after moving to the Northern part of America and then dedicating good part of his early years to the jewelry. In the war he immediately decided to move to one of the "new" Cities looking for true order. Known for being relaxed even in difficult situations, he is also a reserved and a respectful person. His ability to recognize the origin of any materials was once useful in forensic work in his country's Investigation Police Department and then used his knowledge to the sale and purchase of jewelry.

In Character Information

What is your name?: Sergio Chang

Why do you want to become a part of the CCA?: I want to become part of the CCA because it's not enough to be grateful to the Combine. I really need to be part of all the order they have achieved.

How would you be an asset to the union?:
By assuring the order in the streets and by being a helpful member.

Where do you wish to take your CCA career?: I want to be useful within the CCA and be useful as part of them in any possible way, even if I'm a bit old my years of experience in the army can be helpful.

What is your age?: I am 37 years old.

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Join date : 2013-06-03

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Re: MADsushi's application

Post by Gerby! on Sun Jun 09, 2013 7:26 pm

-Neutral Edging on -Support. I did not like the fact you didn't proofread this, shown by the obvious grammar mistakes, and I also don't like the fact everything is so short. There is also some powergame, and a few rules broken in the scenarios.

Try to make it longer, and proofread, proofread, proofread. Then I might start edging to a +Support
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Re: MADsushi's application

Post by MADsushio on Mon Jun 10, 2013 9:10 pm

Gerby! wrote:-Neutral Edging on -Support. I did not like the fact you didn't proofread this, shown by the obvious grammar mistakes, and I also don't like the fact everything is so short. There is also some powergame, and a few rules broken in the scenarios.

Try to make it longer, and proofread, proofread, proofread. Then I might start edging to a +Support

Sorry about the grammar mistakes, i'll proofread. It's because English is not my mother language. I'll try to make it longer, I wrote this really hurry because the truth is that I have not much time in the week.

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Re: MADsushi's application

Post by Oryx on Mon Jun 10, 2013 9:48 pm

As in you said, "English isn't my mother language." Try on improving to even more you can think of. I can't blame you on this, speaking of that my official language is French (Family originated from Quebec, Canada. So that means I'm usually shoved into francophone culture). So I hor you understand from your words. Now, I don't usually go easy in applications like this, but I'll give you my +Netural (As in I like it, just not to my full understanding) my understanding, and the originality from the actual role-play is good. Just wok on some cutting edge examples, and I'll know you can make it!
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Re: MADsushi's application

Post by MADsushio on Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:56 pm

Oryx wrote:As in you said, "English isn't my mother language." Try on improving to even more you can think of. I can't blame you on this, speaking of that my official language is French (Family originated from Quebec, Canada. So that means I'm usually shoved into francophone culture). So I hor you understand from your words. Now, I don't usually go easy in applications like this, but I'll give you my +Netural (As in I like it, just not to my full understanding) my understanding, and the originality from the actual role-play is good. Just wok on some cutting edge examples, and I'll know you can make it!
Thank you!
Role playing is really helping me to improve my english, and also it is helping me to develop  my characters more correctly.

Think I'm gonna keep playing as a citizen for a while before trying to play as a more demanding character.

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